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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A brief rhyming write of despair.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
hope

A man weathering the storms in his life ~ wishing the turmoil would cease ~ and peace would descend.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Sadness and loss of hope..

"If there was a dangling rope I would be at its end. There is no more material of my heart left to mend."..That says it all..Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It’s Like This Poem Was Written For Me..... Think You....

I can relate it’s like just a moment of peace is that too much to ask? I feel as though a certain deity refused to help me, and he is the one that is holding that dangling rope. I just wished I knew what did I do or didn’t do to piss him off so much either in this life or in the previous one, and I would also like to know what fucked up plan I fit in. I’m sick of his shit. Ever seen the first Toy Story? And ever heard of Sid Myers?

10/10 Stars

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