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Passions Dance
I like the changes you made and this one is my Fav but I also know they are all woven together, all I can say is, Great job and More Art :)
S~
intriguing
nice words woven well
~Syn
the story
you are telling in this series is a delightful romp. True, the poems could be a bit more polished, but overall, they're quite good.
~~~
Yes Art some edits needed but the essence of the work is so wonderful I over look them lol.. but that does not mean you should not (GRIN)... the story is lovely and captivating.. this line was original and therefore one of my favorites of your work..
Her hand found a serpent turn to wood and dew
Originality is rare.. and therefore I love when I see such a description so vividly..
wonderful journey
Du Lac~
5 - 5 - 5 - 5 - 5
Your EXCELLENT poem has been metioned on the new poems thread!!!
What a GREAT series!!! Thankyou so MUCH !!!
Bravo for Art's abilities..
He does series poetry with the finesse of a dedicated entertainer. He does that so well. Better than most!
~L
THIS of the French Rose series...
was My favorite! I can't fathom how you weave a story like this into poetry form, but I'm sure glad you do! It is a talent all on its own, and I'm honored to be a small part of the next series with you, Art. But I must confess - it was all offered though ulterior motives. I'll now have privvy to all of the next series before it hits the boards! This however, is a melancholic moment for alot of us here what with the French Rose saga closing her petals. But knowing there's a new flower of your poetry "blooming" soon will help us all perk up! Looking sooooooooo forward to it!
Vixxx
uh!
You forgot to mention yourself in todays reviews..."As long as you recite poetry I'll be here,"
Dantes manhood on the tongue of a French dear ...so tickles the fire of blue..
white lightning is all I can say to you...wow me...blue
~~
An excellent finale to Lady Jina's tale;
what better way than for a poet to get so rewarded
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