All Comments on 'Summer Song'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please

Love the mood and feel of this story. It carries a sensuality with it. Heady only begins to describe it. Please keep writing!

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 5 years ago
Too bad...

The world doesn't really work that way. Summer doesn't last forever and May and December relationships don't last either. But for a few minutes it's nice to think it's possible. 4* for trying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Killing me Softly?

Very well told fantasy. I liked the device of having both tell part of the story.

Say "so what?" to the criticism. Stories don't have to be realistic.

R.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 3 years ago

Love at first sight?

It didn't take long for Ian and Ashlee to get into bed together. Wish I had a voice like his and could strum a guitar. Good story.

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With a slight tremor to my heart beat, I write this for the thrilling dreams other stories have given me.