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Where can I get one!?
If only it were so. ;- ) Well written and a novel concept. Good job.
Earthborn
I liked the notion of an earthborn woman. LOL
Good luck.
You should have called. . .
. . and saved the money. I wasn't doing anything.
Don't suppose the demon that put you off-course had Rumpled horns by any chance?
Liked it lots.
I'm A Sucker for Golem Stories
So I did read the whole thing. The wildness of your imagination kept me reading, and the mixed golem-cyborg angle was clever (Prof. Wald's accent too). You're going to have to do worse than this to win last place, I'm afraid.
Absolutely fascinating!
You have a wild and vivid imagination. I'm impressed! I agree, you will have to do much worse to win last Og. Very clear and well written, you were able to keep me reading this strange tale. Kisses and hugs for a job well done! ~Minx
weird and clever concept
good execution. but does Elaine really want to be co-dominate?
5*
if for no other reason than the originality of this piece. a really good read!!.
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