by Jennifer C
I liked Submission very much indeed Jennifer! Another incredibly erotic sexy poem, I am becoming such a massive fan of your work, you write with such a passion, I think your amazing! Great work x
If you were with me I would submit on every occasion. Oh, if only................. Jennifer, you excel each time you write. And I submit to you. When shall we met so that I can prove it?
Your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
Thanks for the journey~
or being in submission? Personally, I'd have a hard time making that choice. Loved the sensuality in this.
Permission, submission
I'll take the latter any day;
Your writing is so hot,
that all I can say is
yes
yes
yes
yes.....until exhaustion