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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve04/09/05

I really like this, Remec

I love poetry that focuses on just a moment. Nicely done.

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by My Erotic Tail04/09/05

mention

Your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"

Thanks for the journey~

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by Wanton Vixxxen04/10/05

I closed My eyes and imagined...

it was Me waking up to that reveal of love's appreciation. So much was expressed in so few words here, Remec. The "less is more" really worked in the composition of this piece. Thank you.

Vixxx

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by Bridget6904/10/05

Wake up call.

Captures such intimacy in so few words. Very nice!

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by Samandiriel04/15/05

yes.

Short but sweet, all the right things rolled into a perfect little package.

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by AppleBiter06/20/05

I love

to watch my lover still asleep. Very nicely captured. :)

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