by ClairePoole
It’s a great start but a little slow for the first third but I know you had a lot to introduce in just one chapter. Really looking forward to where this is going now as the setup is done and hopefully the ‘real’ action begins! I also really like the idea of a man being turned into a woman, this sets up so many possibilities!
Hope to see more.
Nice idea although does rush through the transformation part a little too quick. Would like to see more though.