Plagarism.?..I have read this story about two or three years ago.
I didn't copy anyone's story. If I did, Literotica wouldn't have posted it dumbfuck.
Nice light story. Don't let some people keep you from writing more stories. Maybe continue this one and involve Mom and/or Dad, another Sister? I am looking forward to more stories from you.
I absoluty love this story. Her Horny Little Brother great idea. Maybe for future storys have max bring a couple of friends over. Actuatly the same thing happened to me with an idea I had for a story called Dr. Hooters. I was trying to go for a cross between the incedable hulk and Odo from Star trek Deep space 9. But some dumb whiny jew type person found some thing simalar to what I had written and reported it. I figured she a scientist her tits can grow why not go with the obvious
I liked your story but if she's wearing a thong,
"Hello Kitty" would not be stretched across her ass cheeks. Keep up the good work.
I kind of enjoyed the idea of the story...however ..next time you write try to remember details..
one minute he is wearing PJ's...then he is wearing jeans?
she is down to her bra...then she has a shirt on?
small details like this would make it far more enjoyable and less confusing
other then that....well done
Even fantasy needs a touch of reality.
Ejaculate? Where'd you find that?!
You are one of the best in Literotica site .
Keep up the good work you do. Continue Writing
Completely rediculous. All his girlfrieds only had "C" cups? He didn't know his sister had giant tits? Please!!!
P.S. I have read a couple of plagerized stories on Literotica before. I don't believe that every story is checked against every other story. That would be pretty much impossible.
It's a very dumb tale
It was a good story. There were a few minor details wrong but otherwise an entertaining read. Of course I might be a little biased as my wife has 54f tits and we both love women with big breasts.
This isnt writing its rubbish. Im payton moore from gladstone publishing. You need to clear up all the inconsistancys, then add more depth into the story lines if you are going to be a real writer.A fan recommended your work to me, and i hate to say it but until u work on the body of the story(commonly known as fill) your work will neveer be published.
Good story. What a lucky brother
love it, you're very creative.
How can a thong have a message across both ass cheeks? Or is Brenda tattooed?
Oh Yes, Brenda sure showed her hot and horny brother what he had never experienced. I guess they decided to show each other what they desired and went for it !! Max cummed all over his sister and Brenda returned the favor.
Hopefully, this is just the start to his education and they plan to keep on going. Who knows, maybe they'll move in together and keep a good thing going ? Thank you and hopefully you'll write another chapter. Thank you.
There haven't been very many stories like this one that were worth finishing. Thank you, kimberlykitten, for words that truly made me envision the action.
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