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by impressive04/13/05

You nailed it --

The uncertainty, the whim, the daring ... all wrapped up. Well done. ~Imp

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by Honey12304/13/05

Just perfect!

I smiled through your poem, thinking ~ wondering: Should she? Will she? And then of course, wondering: Could I? Nice job!

~Honey

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by Belegon04/13/05

Very fun!

Mixing up the Suess-like repeating rhymes with more mature vocabulary and themes. I really enjoyed it and smiled my way through.

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by LadyJeanne04/13/05

I held

my breath throughout this poem. The temptation, the desire, the questioning hesitation building inexorably until the delicious need is finally voiced. Lovely! Thanks, sweets! LJ

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