by oggbashan
Sorry to dash your hopes OG.. but in all good concience I can't 1 bomb ya.... I know you had hopes of having the worst story in the competition.. but I'm afraid... you write too well!!!
I hate to be so prosaic, but that was a most unique, and very interesting story. My only regret is not getting to know how Cerys reacted to the news about what her husband did with his inheritance.
Rumple
Sorry to disappoint but can't vote low on this beautifully crafted story. Congrats Og... a fine tale.
Great work Ogg, well written and I was hooked from the start. Good luck!
Og... I put off yours till the last.. I knew all along I was saving the best for last... hope my 5 bomb doesn't cost ya the prize
Sorry Og,
I can't vote real low simply because you changed names on the wife near the end. LOL
Nice story.