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og.. it's not worthy of a 1 bomb
Sorry to dash your hopes OG.. but in all good concience I can't 1 bomb ya.... I know you had hopes of having the worst story in the competition.. but I'm afraid... you write too well!!!
A unique, well-told story
I hate to be so prosaic, but that was a most unique, and very interesting story. My only regret is not getting to know how Cerys reacted to the news about what her husband did with his inheritance.
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Excellent Read
Sorry to disappoint but can't vote low on this beautifully crafted story. Congrats Og... a fine tale.
No bomb here either...
Great work Ogg, well written and I was hooked from the start. Good luck!
saved the best for last
Og... I put off yours till the last.. I knew all along I was saving the best for last... hope my 5 bomb doesn't cost ya the prize
Sorry
Sorry Og,
I can't vote real low simply because you changed names on the wife near the end. LOL
Nice story.
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