I loved how the words suggested that the attraction was more than just raw sex; how the poetry of the language added a layer or a more realistic desire to her feelings. Great job!
Wha! This was amazing. I love being able to get into someone's mind and view their innermost desires, and you captured that perfectly. I've definitely had some of those same thoughts, and it was nice to see them so perfectly articulated.
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Poetry!
I loved how the words suggested that the attraction was more than just raw sex; how the poetry of the language added a layer or a more realistic desire to her feelings. Great job!
Soooo hot!
Wha! This was amazing. I love being able to get into someone's mind and view their innermost desires, and you captured that perfectly. I've definitely had some of those same thoughts, and it was nice to see them so perfectly articulated.
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