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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/11/05

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I assume that these are letters to god? They make little sense in any other contest. - I can only hope your partner is not terminated.

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by msboy804/12/05

I'm slow on the uptake...

OK, I now realize what you're getting at, what your purpose is, who they were written to, etc. I am sorry for any bad things that are happening to you. I believe you believe He has a plan. Sometimes we feel resentment (I have MS), but hang in there.

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by Wltdnfaded01/01/06

This was Excellent

A beautiful piece. Loved your use of rhythm and flow. Thank you for this.

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by LeBroz02/10/07

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Having now read the second of two prose poem letters, it can be taken literally or more likely, metaphorically; a complaint to upper management/CEO, aka God. Very good, an unexpectedly different spin.

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