All Comments on 'The Amulet Ch. 01'

very good job, can't wait to read the next part of the series!

Well written, erotic. Anxiously awaiting next chapter.

Thank you Textguy84.

Please keep this one going, it's got lots of promise. You are a very good writer. P.S. I'm glad he didn't take her again in the alley while she was asleep.

Well written & believable.

Well written, erotic. Anxiously awaiting next chapter.

So, where's chapter 2, 3, 4... :) This was a very steam and sexually charged tale. You left it open for lots more the way you described the amulet glowly as the friends engage in, and finish, their sexual conquest together!

More! More! More! ;)

More more more

im jealous... id love to be that girl...

but you leave it un-finished what happens next and does Jack get

other women to fall under the spell of his Amulet.

hes going to a university with alot of possibilities.

It is a great start but it has been 7 years. Are there more chapters to come?

Please keep writing - hope there's more to come :)

I disliked the main character and felt sorry for Tabitha.