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good job
very good job, can't wait to read the next part of the series!
Really Good
Well written, erotic. Anxiously awaiting next chapter.
Thank you Textguy84.
Geat Start
Please keep this one going, it's got lots of promise. You are a very good writer. P.S. I'm glad he didn't take her again in the alley while she was asleep.
Where is the next bit?
Well written & believable.
very good
Well written, erotic. Anxiously awaiting next chapter.
Steamy!
So, where's chapter 2, 3, 4... :) This was a very steam and sexually charged tale. You left it open for lots more the way you described the amulet glowly as the friends engage in, and finish, their sexual conquest together!
More! More! More! ;)
more
More more more
looking for a man with an amulet..
im jealous... id love to be that girl...
Like the Story
but you leave it un-finished what happens next and does Jack get
other women to fall under the spell of his Amulet.
hes going to a university with alot of possibilities.
will there be more
It is a great start but it has been 7 years. Are there more chapters to come?
More please
Please keep writing - hope there's more to come :)
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