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what's the rush

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by Anonymous

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by duckiesmut04/12/05

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"enticements
just another sham
from a flim flam man"

I read this section over and over in my mind, like it was on loop, and the more I read it, the more I enjoyed it.

The rhythm reminded me of that scene in the cave from Dead Poets' Society...or...um...perhaps that's just me. :)

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by My Erotic Tail04/12/05

the blues

is that like the blues blue~ nice write~

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by Wanton Vixxxen04/13/05

Yeah, what's the rush anyway?

blue, this seems to have caught you on a "blue's down day", but you know you're not alone You captured every familiar disappointment's emotion in this poem of love con artists. See? Now you've put Me in the mood to go find one, lure him to My dungeon and make an honest man of him - the unrushed, hard way! Great job, blue!

Vixxx

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