All Comments on 'An Unfinished Story'

by victoriawhita

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very creative

Very creative, I would love to be asked out this way. Seems more safe, fun, and interesting than a direct question. Sometimes the shy guys are the best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
very good

I even changed my rating from a 50 to a 75. Your writings are very well gathered together. My only suggestion is that "Victoria" would be a *cog* in "Brian"s wheel, not a "clog".

nekocanekocaover 8 years ago
Is there a part two?

Very sweet and enjoyable story. But, sadly it ended so soon! We felt that there should of been a part two?

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