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byTawny Brown©
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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Tale04/12/05

storm lover

thunder rumble let it rain, I am thirsty anyway

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by Syndra Lynn04/13/05

good work

Welcome to Lit

~Syn

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by Wanton Vixxxen04/13/05

So...

the storm I heard rumbling in the distance was you on the porch with your lover? Indeed this is a very nice first poem post. I especially liked your work's climactic
ending, " Not a soul within miles as we create our own storm" Thunderous applause for the new neighbor at Lit!

Vixxx

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