All Comments on 'Ghost Hubby Haunting Ch. 01'

by SEVERUSMAX

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amasterfoundamasterfoundabout 19 years ago
Awesome work!

loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
oh I love it

I love stories of sexual revenge, and this one is great! Very sexually visual, very erotically violent. Excellent job!

Xman72357Xman72357over 18 years ago
Great Story

PLease contiue the story it has a lot of potential. Especially the revenge to the wife and freind Marla.

FeistyLilKittenFeistyLilKittenover 17 years ago
WOW!

Sir this was an absolutley AWESOME story! I loved it. :)

Starz DemonaStarz Demonaalmost 9 years ago
I liked the idea...

I liked the over all idea of the story, but the speed with which things took place was a little...off. Things happened so suddenly that it was a bit jarring. I had trouble getting into it because of it. Honestly, if I had been turned on when I started reading this, this rapid escalation would have ruined the whole mood.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Instead of Michelle, a woman, an should have been in the seance and the ghost should have entered him. Then all the sex would have really been great.

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