by SEVERUSMAX
I love stories of sexual revenge, and this one is great! Very sexually visual, very erotically violent. Excellent job!
PLease contiue the story it has a lot of potential. Especially the revenge to the wife and freind Marla.
I liked the over all idea of the story, but the speed with which things took place was a little...off. Things happened so suddenly that it was a bit jarring. I had trouble getting into it because of it. Honestly, if I had been turned on when I started reading this, this rapid escalation would have ruined the whole mood.
Instead of Michelle, a woman, an should have been in the seance and the ghost should have entered him. Then all the sex would have really been great.