All Comments on 'Ravaged in Broad Daylight! At 18! Ch. 06'

omg, seriously that was the most coolest of all endings ever, we love you furry man

I shall miss this series! Please write a new series!

It brought tears to my eyes

loved every installment...definitely wanted to read more...looking forward to more stories from you!

Hot and tender...I love it. perfect conclusion. Great Job.

I'm a sucker for happy endings. The bit about David was a little depressing, but when I got to the ending, I was just amazed. How can one person create such a tenderness throughout such a vivid story? I'm sad to see this series end, but I'm glad to know the ending!

Great work and writing!

Probably the best written and structured series I have read on literotica. You gathered my interest right away and forced me to read every word. While many stories here are mostly fuck-and-suck, you managed to construct a moving story around that. Keep up the good work!

Wow. I looked at your story as it's is linked to Billy, You both are great authers. You hook a person and don't let them go. I'll read anything by you and Billy. Keep writing, Please!!

Bookiepan

I thought I had read all of this series. But, it seems you sneaked one in on me, unseen... And I love the ending... It's awesome...

Loved it!!!

Billy (WindStormy)

This series amounted to a great piece of work.

Not to be cliche, but there needs to be a movie on this.

This was an awesome series. I only wish there had been more.

Ravaged is HOT, yet innocently sweet and best of all, positive in tone all the way thru. It is an example of the best in erotic fiction. Thank you, and please keep writing.

Love the ending. Especially the last line said by the lawyer. So sweet. This series kinda remind me of an old movie,9 1/2 Weeks, but I like this ending better :D

One of the best I have read in quite a while. The whole story way easy to read as it was well written. The ending ended on a up note as to where more can be added without looking like it is just a add on. Keep up the great writting. Doc

i don't know who you are or where you came from but you're just awesome! this was great. keep up the good work.

I adored this. It was fun, well written, hot as it should be, but the difference between this piece of fiction and all the others I've read in the site is the sweetness and intimacy you put in kisses. I adored it, I felt really touched by this last chapter in particular.

Thank you so much for writing it ;)

~Billie

I liked this story from the beginning, it had something different, it wasn't just sex, although that was great - it was compelling to read and so descriptive I just couldn't wait to get from one chapter to the next and now that I've finished it I would like to read more. Thank you for giving a real horny story - I will continue to read all your stories and drool over your lovely descriptions of activities,characters and venues! mmm

It was like reading a book you can't put down, I read all the chapters in one sitting. All the while trying to put myself in Mark's place. What a fantastic adventure!

just a great story the sex the ending so nice

please add more! This series has been so amazing and i just cant get enough!

the lawyer fell in love with a whore who gave it away to old men and strangers for free- well i guess he got paid for it 30 years later.

plz contact ine the story its soooooooooooo good

Eric's the typical Inheritance Slimy Swindler. The whole story is rather far fetched and unbelievably uninteresting. I only read this shitty story to the end, just to find out how stupid it would get. My thumps are down. My advise: Try something that is real and not fiction in its utmost stupidity .!!

I like the whole story from beginning to end from him losing his virginity to being fucked in a public bar to him finding love twice

This was an awesome story and I loved how it all played out. The ending was perfect, well done.

Something like this sort of happened to me an d I expressed that in a story here that you can read: SLAVE GOES TO THE MOVIES. Check it out.

This system sucks. I accidentally hit rating 1 when I meant to hit 5 and the flippin system won't let me change it.