All Comments on 'In Our Room at Pedregal'

What a sensitive, insightful, beautifully-written and gorgeously-haunting group of poems.

has said it all --nice work although I'd prefer a clearer conclusion but maybe I'm dumb

5 stars

And yes, at times, guilty as charged.

I thought “abandoned” was a bit harsh but reflected more on the epigraph and last line, and it fit for me. “Ambien,” however, made it too much like whimsical light verse unless that was your intention. The poem otherwise captures so well “Love is patient, love is kind.”