by JustSkye
I realy like this story...has a nice twist of an ending and is erotic without being overly dominating. More of a control feeling between 2 people that share more than just the power\pain thing...love shouldnt be painful IMHO.
Time for you to write more, VS. Very erotic and evocative - an arousing vignette to say the least.
Better second time round.
So easy to masurbate to as well.
The rimming was what made me pop, so damned hot.
Very hot with a great change of pace from being contolled to being in control .
You need to write more please .Or should that be an order ?
Great story, I like the way you think, made me rock hard in no time.
Ur words are beutiful. I want to make you my slave and have you do whatever I say. I luv ur story. Wonderfull.
Skye (what a lovely name), I just read "A Day With My Master
and, like several of your other readers also commented, I had to jack off just to avoid an explosion in my heart! Wow!
You can lick my ass and any other part any time you wish!
Good luck on finding your north star. I'd be glad to join you on the journey. Keep writing. Keep me "up."
Woodrow A. Johnson
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