All Comments on 'Waiting For Rachel'

You need to get an editor to clear up some minor little typos, but the quality of your story is absolutely superb. It's good to find someone who understands love, especially in this day and age.

After knowing each other for several years as platonic friends

Rachel and Jake finally discover each other sexually. Wonderful little story full of affection for each other. The sexual activities seem so natural. Endearing Read!

They have been dating for three years, and no sex. I can understand that but she has a supply of condoms in her night stand. But still a great story.

What happened to happily ever after? You lost touch and then she got married to someone else.... LAME ENDING! But everything else was beautiful and sweet. Good story, although it could have been better.