Hot plot and interesting relationship, but I would like a little more detail and description of the action and I always prefer stories where the characters have names. It's just easier to enter the fantasy when you can put a name to a face. Still, nice story. Keep writing.
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Hot plot and interesting relationship, but I would like a little more detail and description of the action and I always prefer stories where the characters have names. It's just easier to enter the fantasy when you can put a name to a face. Still, nice story. Keep writing.
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