All Comments on 'An Alternate Reality'

I thought this was a erotic site. How was this story sexy or erotic ? Maybe you should submit it to Readers Digest.

I would like to see a couple more chapters of this. I liked it.

You've set the scene; I'm looking forward to see where this goes.

Don't be put off by the other "Anonymous", who needs to give you time. Unless he or she can only begin to be aroused by fuckfests.

it is worth a second part

Excellent start. I cant think of anyone who hasn't had a dream that didn't wake them up, so this could associate with anyone. There is no preface to explain anything, which would be like anyone having a dream, nice. Love to see the next chapter. I can mentally see countless possibilities.

Nice start and I was just getting into it. Then... nothing. Please continue. 3 Stars for now, but I am sure it will get 5 when you finish it.

This and the gay wife are probably my favorite stories on this site. PLEASE FOLLOW UP ON THIS STORY

It starts perfectly but it suddenly stops. Please add more content. Also allow women wear bras and panties, dresses :)