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by GoodGirl_xx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
"You" / name

I suggest you personalize your stories by using a name instead of "you".

"You" change the story into dealing with a material item, and makes it much less readworthy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Don change it

Above commenter is clueless. Don't change the point of view.

Naughty_Looking_GlassNaughty_Looking_Glassover 5 years ago

I liked the poit of view as well!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Intimate

I liked the first person POV. It made it feel intimate, like I could be the lover and you are recounting an experience or explaining a fantasy. Great story! I’m

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Hi dear Reader, and welcome. This is all very new for me - exploring a few fantasies through story, and trying to improve my skills as I go. The stories I write and publish on Literotica are a testing ground for my published works, under the pseudonym, Isabelle Windsor. Th...