That was an awsome story. I can't wait for the next chapter. You did great PLEASE write the next chapter soon. There are so many places you can go with this.
You did a tremendous job of creating Mom's conflicted inner dialogue and slowly letting her say the words out loud. Very forbidden and very sexy action! You must write another chapter - Mom needs to dress in lacy lingerie, stockings, tight skirts, and classy high-heeled pumps to further live out her (and her son's) hot fantasies!!
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Anonymous04/30/05
Superb - from James
Truly magnificent story and so beautifully written, the slow buildup was perfect.
I totally agree with what heellover has suggested.
May I add a suggestion of my own, how about the son joins an adult photography club, they need a female model for a , he suggests his mother, the first session could be very innocent, and then, when they require a model for a glamour shoot, they ask him if he thinks that his mother might be willing to pose for them.
Of course she allows herself to be persuaded, and after the first session, they ask her back again, this time she is to pose with a male model, or models.
Perhaps your other fans would like to say if what they think of this scenario.
Thankyou, great work.
by
Anonymous04/30/05
hope you keep writting
I hope that you keep writting the story. You cant keep us guessing what will happen next. Hope that you will have her dress up for us in different outfits so he can keep taking pictures of her. Hope to hear more from you soon.
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Anonymous04/30/05
Keep Writing
That was one of the best mother/son I've read in a while. Keep writing and soon.
Fantastic. The mother's inner monologue was key to making this story great. Keep up the good work; I can't wait for the next story!
by
Anonymous04/30/05
Excellent
The mother's inner turmoil was just right - that knowledge of sin is absolutely essential to a hot, believeable mom-son story. I would've liked more verbally expressed anguish after she surrendered, though.
by
Anonymous04/30/05
Great!!
Best Iv read in a while and it has so many ways to go from here.Will she really become a slut? Will she become the slut of the neighborhood?Will she do gangbangs? Cant wait!
by
Anonymous04/30/05
Yeah baby!!!
Fantastic story so far! Please continue the storyline, but keep her feeling the anguish of succumbing to her neglected sexual desires towards her son. can't wait until the next chapter!
Deek
by
Anonymous04/30/05
James here again
Further to my earlier comment, I would like to add, how much I agree with heels lover about the mothers, " inner conflict", and her use of explicit language.
The photographic scenario is wonderful, as it lends itself to so many erotic possibilities, also, I don't think that any of us believed that the son realy did, or really would, delete the photographs, so please tell us what he did with them, did he discuss them with his mother ?, did he show them to anyone else ?, possibly to the senior members of the photography club ?.
I also very much agree with heels lovers comment about stockings etc., I strongly feel that stockings and suspenders are essential, what would also be very desireable are, fishnets, crotchless tights, open tipped bras, quarter cup and half cup bras to uplift her tits and to leave her nipples exposed, also basques and translucent nighties.
My one criticism of your magnificent story would be that, in the kitchen scene, she removed her panties much too quickly, I thought that in the garage session, where her panties slipped slowly aside and exposed her cunt, at first by accident and then with her help, was much slower and more erotic.
In the kitchen situation,I would have liked her to have posed with one leg pulled up so that her foot rested on the chair, and then for her to have slowly pulled her panty leg aside, and then for her to have evenually bunched up the panty gusset and to have pulled the panties up tightly into her crotch, whereupon she could have sawed the panties back and forth and also fingered her clit, possibly with her sons help.
Further to my suggestion about the photography club, I suggest that the members of the club should range in ages from youths of similar age to her son, to elderly men, and that many of the members should be respected pillars of the community, such as teachers, headmasters, accountants, lawyers, local politicians, church ministers, and even her husbands bosses.
There should also be a few lower class, vulgar, ruffianly type of men.
Her first modelling session could be fairly innocent, with maybe just a little hint of tease, such as a cleavage or thigh show.
Later sessions could move on slowly through, swimsuit, lingerie, glamour, to poseing with one or more male models who could be club members, possibly even her son.
She might also provide the members with a display of her use of sex toys.
Perhaps some of their photographs, and possibly videos, might end up in the public domain, such as being sold in sexshops etc.
I believe that your story is destined to become one of the classics of this genre,( and it would seem that many others here would agree with me about that ).
So please, please. don't stop writing, and please do write one, and preferably several, followups to this story.
Once again, I thank and applaud you.
by
Anonymous05/01/05
just great
One of the best stories. Nice pace of action. Just a great story.
by
Anonymous05/01/05
More! More, Please!
Just beautiful. Couldn't even stop to go to bathroom.Please say that you will give us a part two.
by
Anonymous05/01/05
fucking his mom
when is he going to slide his cock into his mothers hot wet juicy pussy ?
by
Anonymous05/02/05
great
come on let have him fuck his mom. and sister also tit fuck his mom
by
Anonymous05/04/05
Great Mother/Son story
I hope that you have part 2,3,4, and maybe 5 in mind. We all know that she wants her son to use her as his own personal slut. GREAT STORY. Curtis
by
Anonymous05/06/05
this is one of the hot ones,more please
completely make mom his slut,fuck her into submission.mom begging for loving and son got what she needs.he loves her and she loves him.give us more of this story, thanks.
I love when a well told story tells of a woman who gives in to her lust no matter who is watching--even a son!!!
by
Anonymous08/07/06
ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhh.....cant say more
reeeeally...to spent to say anything! what a great story!
by
Anonymous08/08/06
never fails
never fails to get me off...I wish the mother could resist a bit more, but anyway, brilliant story !
by
Anonymous12/31/06
I'm a Slut
I love feeling like a slut and loved this story. My pussy is so hot and wet right now. Keep the slut mommie stories cumming.
by
Anonymous12/13/07
Great story
My only problem--and this holds true for all the Literotica story submissions--is the lack of proofreading, annoying typos and such that distract from and interfere with the readers' enjoyment of the tale.
by
Anonymous01/24/08
Typos Be Damned Full Speed Ahead
Who cares about a few typos when we have a really hot story like this--and to think there are 11 more to come. I mean cum!
This story series has got to be one of the best I've seen on literotica so far... and I've been a member for two years.... guess it just took me a while to find it huh? lol I had trouble reading it after a while but that was just because I was so hot I couldn't focus anymore... I love the insite on mommie's mind and all the nasty things she does.. it's quality that is hard to find and I LOVE IT EVERY SINGLE TIME I READ IT!!!!!!!!!
If you decide to write any more stories, PLEASE, PLEASE take advantage of the FREE editing service before posting.
When the spelling and grammer are so bad that one has to stop and try to figure out what the writer is attempting to say, it destroys the entire flow.
After awhile i give up and go to a different author.
As for those who say" what's a few typos" - a typo is an error caused by hitting the wrong key, when the same word is butchered in the same way throughout the story it is because the writer doesn't Kmow the corrct word spelling.
The looong description on how he instructs her to take her clothes off, then how she lusts for him, are some of the best I have read. Am looking forward to read the following installments, mm
Di
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Anonymous11/27/10
Hot hot hot
I believe it's the duty of every mother to initiate their sons in all aspects of sex. Here is one hot mom who resists; but does not succeed by allowing the seduction go forward and ends up teaching the value hot sex!
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Anonymous11/29/10
Loved the story
Hot beginning... I look forward to reading the rest of the series.
I like it the only thing wrong about it is the mom shave her pussy. And please give more detals about the panties like the color, the metreal that they are made off and the stile of panties
The story is great. Mom is hungry for cock, but doesn't want to admit it.He needs to fuck her with that magnificent 10" pole he has. She should let her pubic hair grow back so he can see what she looks like with it, rather than a bald cunt.
Her wearing some fine lingerie might enhance the picture too.
Maybe him watching her taking a piss would incorporate a few new things.
Contact me if you want @JhMcKn@aol.com
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Anonymous07/14/12
Lol, exiting? It should be exciting and I couldn't help but pause every time I saw it, but I really like this story even with its poor writing. I read the "descriptions" or whatever of the later chapters and I don't really want to know who the hell Frank is. I was kinda hoping that Tommy would be the only boy she'd be banging, but w/e.
We would all be better off with moms like this! All literary critics aside, great subject matter and progression!
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Anonymous08/01/12
Why
do you stupid americans say 'mommie' instead of the correct 'mummy'?
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Anonymous10/29/12
Stupid Americans?
Before commenting, you moronic twit, "Mummy" is the correct term to use when referring to embalmed Egyptians. However if a writer prefers to refer to their character as mommie, mommy, mummy, mum, mamma, mama or slut-whore, it is completely up to them. Grow a dick, would you? In the meantime, lay off the racial/national slurs. It only shows your own stupidity. Carry on, Fantasy69!
English
Awsome Story
That was an awsome story. I can't wait for the next chapter. You did great PLEASE write the next chapter soon. There are so many places you can go with this.
Great Erotic Story!
You did a tremendous job of creating Mom's conflicted inner dialogue and slowly letting her say the words out loud. Very forbidden and very sexy action! You must write another chapter - Mom needs to dress in lacy lingerie, stockings, tight skirts, and classy high-heeled pumps to further live out her (and her son's) hot fantasies!!
Superb - from James
Truly magnificent story and so beautifully written, the slow buildup was perfect.
I totally agree with what heellover has suggested.
May I add a suggestion of my own, how about the son joins an adult photography club, they need a female model for a , he suggests his mother, the first session could be very innocent, and then, when they require a model for a glamour shoot, they ask him if he thinks that his mother might be willing to pose for them.
Of course she allows herself to be persuaded, and after the first session, they ask her back again, this time she is to pose with a male model, or models.
Perhaps your other fans would like to say if what they think of this scenario.
Thankyou, great work.
hope you keep writting
I hope that you keep writting the story. You cant keep us guessing what will happen next. Hope that you will have her dress up for us in different outfits so he can keep taking pictures of her. Hope to hear more from you soon.
Keep Writing
That was one of the best mother/son I've read in a while. Keep writing and soon.
Wow.
Fantastic. The mother's inner monologue was key to making this story great. Keep up the good work; I can't wait for the next story!
Excellent
The mother's inner turmoil was just right - that knowledge of sin is absolutely essential to a hot, believeable mom-son story. I would've liked more verbally expressed anguish after she surrendered, though.
Great!!
Best Iv read in a while and it has so many ways to go from here.Will she really become a slut? Will she become the slut of the neighborhood?Will she do gangbangs? Cant wait!
Yeah baby!!!
Fantastic story so far! Please continue the storyline, but keep her feeling the anguish of succumbing to her neglected sexual desires towards her son. can't wait until the next chapter!
Deek
James here again
Further to my earlier comment, I would like to add, how much I agree with heels lover about the mothers, " inner conflict", and her use of explicit language.
The photographic scenario is wonderful, as it lends itself to so many erotic possibilities, also, I don't think that any of us believed that the son realy did, or really would, delete the photographs, so please tell us what he did with them, did he discuss them with his mother ?, did he show them to anyone else ?, possibly to the senior members of the photography club ?.
I also very much agree with heels lovers comment about stockings etc., I strongly feel that stockings and suspenders are essential, what would also be very desireable are, fishnets, crotchless tights, open tipped bras, quarter cup and half cup bras to uplift her tits and to leave her nipples exposed, also basques and translucent nighties.
My one criticism of your magnificent story would be that, in the kitchen scene, she removed her panties much too quickly, I thought that in the garage session, where her panties slipped slowly aside and exposed her cunt, at first by accident and then with her help, was much slower and more erotic.
In the kitchen situation,I would have liked her to have posed with one leg pulled up so that her foot rested on the chair, and then for her to have slowly pulled her panty leg aside, and then for her to have evenually bunched up the panty gusset and to have pulled the panties up tightly into her crotch, whereupon she could have sawed the panties back and forth and also fingered her clit, possibly with her sons help.
Further to my suggestion about the photography club, I suggest that the members of the club should range in ages from youths of similar age to her son, to elderly men, and that many of the members should be respected pillars of the community, such as teachers, headmasters, accountants, lawyers, local politicians, church ministers, and even her husbands bosses.
There should also be a few lower class, vulgar, ruffianly type of men.
Her first modelling session could be fairly innocent, with maybe just a little hint of tease, such as a cleavage or thigh show.
Later sessions could move on slowly through, swimsuit, lingerie, glamour, to poseing with one or more male models who could be club members, possibly even her son.
She might also provide the members with a display of her use of sex toys.
Perhaps some of their photographs, and possibly videos, might end up in the public domain, such as being sold in sexshops etc.
I believe that your story is destined to become one of the classics of this genre,( and it would seem that many others here would agree with me about that ).
So please, please. don't stop writing, and please do write one, and preferably several, followups to this story.
Once again, I thank and applaud you.
just great
One of the best stories. Nice pace of action. Just a great story.
More! More, Please!
Just beautiful. Couldn't even stop to go to bathroom.Please say that you will give us a part two.
fucking his mom
when is he going to slide his cock into his mothers hot wet juicy pussy ?
great
come on let have him fuck his mom. and sister also tit fuck his mom
Great Mother/Son story
I hope that you have part 2,3,4, and maybe 5 in mind. We all know that she wants her son to use her as his own personal slut. GREAT STORY. Curtis
this is one of the hot ones,more please
completely make mom his slut,fuck her into submission.mom begging for loving and son got what she needs.he loves her and she loves him.give us more of this story, thanks.
Hot Stroke Story!
Thanks for such a sexy story! I love SLUTs!!!! I can't wait to read the rest.
Very hot!
Well written, believable & very hot story; got me off! Nice work.
Excellent!!!
It was obvious what was going to happen but, when it did, it was so well written that I had no choice but to take myself in hand, more please!
What a ride
Motorcycles and hot babes...a tried and true formula. Never fails to excite. Nice job...slut Mom or no!
Fantastic!
Great build up, inn er conflict nicely handled
Great Story
Well written with great build up! I couldn't keep from stroking my cock while reading...
Hot very hot
Couldn't resist stroking myself as I read.. Keep up the good work
love the story
I love when a well told story tells of a woman who gives in to her lust no matter who is watching--even a son!!!
ooooooooooooooohhhhhhhh.....cant say more
reeeeally...to spent to say anything! what a great story!
never fails
never fails to get me off...I wish the mother could resist a bit more, but anyway, brilliant story !
I'm a Slut
I love feeling like a slut and loved this story. My pussy is so hot and wet right now. Keep the slut mommie stories cumming.
Great story
My only problem--and this holds true for all the Literotica story submissions--is the lack of proofreading, annoying typos and such that distract from and interfere with the readers' enjoyment of the tale.
Typos Be Damned Full Speed Ahead
Who cares about a few typos when we have a really hot story like this--and to think there are 11 more to come. I mean cum!
Oh, for a throat like moms...
My favorite fantasy cum true. I loved this story and wish that were my mom. Throat jobs are awsome. Good story, please write more.
had trouble reading after a while...
This story series has got to be one of the best I've seen on literotica so far... and I've been a member for two years.... guess it just took me a while to find it huh? lol I had trouble reading it after a while but that was just because I was so hot I couldn't focus anymore... I love the insite on mommie's mind and all the nasty things she does.. it's quality that is hard to find and I LOVE IT EVERY SINGLE TIME I READ IT!!!!!!!!!
good story line
If you decide to write any more stories, PLEASE, PLEASE take advantage of the FREE editing service before posting.
When the spelling and grammer are so bad that one has to stop and try to figure out what the writer is attempting to say, it destroys the entire flow.
After awhile i give up and go to a different author.
As for those who say" what's a few typos" - a typo is an error caused by hitting the wrong key, when the same word is butchered in the same way throughout the story it is because the writer doesn't Kmow the corrct word spelling.
Positive
Excellant!
Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaantastic story
The looong description on how he instructs her to take her clothes off, then how she lusts for him, are some of the best I have read. Am looking forward to read the following installments, mm
Di
Hot hot hot
I believe it's the duty of every mother to initiate their sons in all aspects of sex. Here is one hot mom who resists; but does not succeed by allowing the seduction go forward and ends up teaching the value hot sex!
Loved the story
Hot beginning... I look forward to reading the rest of the series.
one hot slut
Looking forward to reading more :)
freaky mom
ooO FUCKK .. i wanted tommie IN ME .!!!! LOL
I WANNA READ MORE
Wonderful fantasy
A mother's dream come true. i can't wait to read the rest!
A really hot story
Too bad that he didn't get his dick into his mom yet, it still was very erotic.
Thanks for the read
Mom's mouth
In High School, my mom once sucked me off 14 days in a row. Two times one day and three another. I loved feeding her cum.EB3E
Excellent
Your writing is very good and I'm enjoying this story tremendously. The slow pace is good as it allows some character development.
great story
I like it the only thing wrong about it is the mom shave her pussy. And please give more detals about the panties like the color, the metreal that they are made off and the stile of panties
Photographing Mom
The story is great. Mom is hungry for cock, but doesn't want to admit it.He needs to fuck her with that magnificent 10" pole he has. She should let her pubic hair grow back so he can see what she looks like with it, rather than a bald cunt.
Her wearing some fine lingerie might enhance the picture too.
Maybe him watching her taking a piss would incorporate a few new things.
Contact me if you want @JhMcKn@aol.com
Lol, exiting? It should be exciting and I couldn't help but pause every time I saw it, but I really like this story even with its poor writing. I read the "descriptions" or whatever of the later chapters and I don't really want to know who the hell Frank is. I was kinda hoping that Tommy would be the only boy she'd be banging, but w/e.
Mom of the year!
We would all be better off with moms like this! All literary critics aside, great subject matter and progression!
Why
do you stupid americans say 'mommie' instead of the correct 'mummy'?
Stupid Americans?
Before commenting, you moronic twit, "Mummy" is the correct term to use when referring to embalmed Egyptians. However if a writer prefers to refer to their character as mommie, mommy, mummy, mum, mamma, mama or slut-whore, it is completely up to them. Grow a dick, would you? In the meantime, lay off the racial/national slurs. It only shows your own stupidity. Carry on, Fantasy69!
GREAT STORY
Story was great made my cock hard, thinking of other stories here with mom. keep up the good work. Wish I was the kid.
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