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Whew! This was (is) a fantastic beginning, looking to see the chapter.
In the one hand its somewhat hard to see something like this beginning so easily, but when it comes to human emotions and sexuality (never mind a teen age boy's drives) it is likely to have happened many many times throughout history.
Whatever, my husband, says that the young man's interests are not a stretch at all to believe. As for me, I have never in such a position, having only daughters, I would have to say that it probably makes me feel safer imagining the what ifs. I can certainly attest to the fact that women can have very powerful sexual feelings themselves. So in that sense, I for one, find it rather to enjoy the thought here.
gregbabe
Slut Mommie
You write a pretty good story and it is easy to enjoy the story. It would be more enjoyable if you would us Spell-Check. There are too many mispelled words. Obviously you have not proof read your article before you submit it on line.
No Negative Comment
I like your story. I have always liked mother/son incest stories. I like yours.
This remains one of the best stories on the site. I would love to see Tommy and his sister (and maybe Gina) get together.
Direct yet well built
A hell of a ride. Not fond of mother partage so i'll wait your next installement (spike)
Yummy!
Ssssssizzler!
There's hope.
It was really hot, though too straight forward and unrealistic in how the mother succumbs. And i hope to god and everything that is holy that you've learned proper punctuations for the next installment, or else i'm not sure i can enjoy it.
Good start
I think you need to plant a baby in her next and make dad a babysitter.
every boy deserves a slut mommy
These are some of the best "Mommy" stories in Literotica. What man has not fantasized doing it to his Mother? And to read about her being submissive, available and obedient is a real turn on. These stories allow one to visualize ones Mother taking it in every position and orifice and of her agreeing to and wanting to do his friends also.
Good sexy story, but....
...your English, [rather, your lack of it], proved too painful for me to fully enjoy an otherwise pretty sexy, yet unbelievable, story. Yet I'm looking forward to reading Part Two.
Don't worry about spelling
I like this story very much. Don't worry about the critics. Editors do come in handy however. xoxoxox Annette
Then she heard Tommy as he yelled up the stairs..............
"There was a message on the answering machine, nobody's coming home tonight, so it's just you and me Mommy Slut!" "I'm going to fuck you so hard, and in so many ways tonight, we're going to have to think up a reason why you'll be limping tomorrow!!!"
I LIKED IT DESPITE:
with out (without)
dinner time (dinnertime)
gone have to take that robe off (going to)
was snow staring (now)
outline of my mount (mound)
handle bars (handlebars)
you laying (lying)
raveled one of my pussy lips (revealed)
loosing my balance (losing)
sexually exited (excited) (2)
turn on (turn-on) (2)
moaned escaped my lips (moan)
pull them (WHAT ARE THEY???? THE MATERIAL????)
peeled to my crotch (CLUMSY EXPRESSION!!!!)
it was me (I)
Mothers (mothers)
looking at me in that way was exiting (exciting)
up front (upfront)
you tits (your)
my naval (navel)
martial of my panties (material)
mommies (Mommy’s)
god (God) (8)
exiting (exciting)
my sons cock (son’s)
Cumming (cumming)
Sluts (sluts)
SO HOT !!!!
thank you
Good one
GREAT story need another chapter or two. Thanks.
to be political incorrect,
It's hotter than a 2 $ pistol. Keep up the good work - you've certainly kept my, - - er, me up.
Advice
First of all, good story. I like the concept of the secret slut mom that gets turned on in front of the camera. I would have spaced the scenes out a little more, but it was hot the way you have it as well. I recommend you ask someone from the Literotica list of editors to edit your work. The errors with this story were more than a few and difficult to ignore in places. I rated this a 5. Good job.
wow
Wow...
Nice.
Wow
The best I have ever red ❤
Mom
I was quite the artist at a young age. I talked my mom into posing for me when I just started drawing people. She never wore much around the house so she willingly posed for me in her bra and panties. Your story brought back so many memories of my mom and I.
Thanks Mike
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