All Comments on 'Concert Piece'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very nice

Good story. I liked how you built it up by recognising that Carlos had spotted her in the crowd beforehand. It made his conquest of her all the more delicious.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffabout 2 years ago

This belongs in the LW category. I hope Ian enjoys the sloppy seconds.

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