That was so damn hot. I loved it. And I hope to read more about those three. Sounds like she has the makings of a perfect sex slave to her step brother and any friend he wants to joing the mix. Keep up the good work.
Her brother is the perfect man. He can satisfy both sexes and himself. If he allows her to become his slave she will be a very lucky girl. Please write more.
Seriously, if you are going to write and submit an a rape story please leave a warning in the title line, summary, or somewhere. That said, I never did like this genre.
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Anonymous04/26/05
perverted sick
You should be locked up since this is the brutality swimming around in your brain. Rape and incest perverted and sick.
First of all, my apologies to those that are crying rape.
Second, I don't write and post stories here for a score. I write what I write, and I post what I post. It was approved by the Literotica staff and so there you go.
There were a few who have suggested that I delete the "rape" comments, but this is a free world, and I do believe in free speech, so the comments won't be deleted.
But.. you're reading an incest/taboo story.. which is already uhhh.. TABOO.. if you aren't into such things.. I'd suggest you stay away from this particular category, no?
I know I'll get slammed for my remarks, but so be it. I hate to make enemies anywhere I go, but sometimes, you can't please everyone.
Take care all, and happy reading.
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Anonymous04/26/05
Dirty trash
Happy reading? Not with this kind of sick perversion!
Lukas
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Anonymous07/22/06
Cool
I thought this story was fun. Don't particularly like the gay aspect, but fuckit! Everyone got off.
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Anonymous12/30/09
rape
hey idiot writer the iterotica staff do not reveiw stories if they did there wouldn't be so many stories with spelling errors if you had a brain you would have put this in the nonconsent area on your own after all that is why they have it also use an editor from now on
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Anonymous09/11/15
Is this what you sick fucks believe? That if you persist in the rape that the victim will enjoy it?
There is a nonconsent section for this.
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Anonymous09/12/15
You must have a very sad shitty life to write this absolute crap. This just be removed from Literotica. Rape of either sex, is a shameful display of a controlling character. Rapists of either sex should be severely beaten to within an inch of their miserable lives for they are no better than useless dog shit and should then be terminated.
Have a great day asshole.
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Anonymous09/12/15
Id the asshole annnoy hates your story, it must be good
English
Hot Hot Story
Hot as hell whew.....
On Fire!!!
That was so damn hot. I loved it. And I hope to read more about those three. Sounds like she has the makings of a perfect sex slave to her step brother and any friend he wants to joing the mix. Keep up the good work.
Rape. pure and simple
'nuff said.
More, please!
Her brother is the perfect man. He can satisfy both sexes and himself. If he allows her to become his slave she will be a very lucky girl. Please write more.
Rape
Nothing but rape. A sick story.
Leave a warning...
Seriously, if you are going to write and submit an a rape story please leave a warning in the title line, summary, or somewhere. That said, I never did like this genre.
perverted sick
You should be locked up since this is the brutality swimming around in your brain. Rape and incest perverted and sick.
At least label stories like this as rape!
You might get a better score!
From The Author
First of all, my apologies to those that are crying rape.
Second, I don't write and post stories here for a score. I write what I write, and I post what I post. It was approved by the Literotica staff and so there you go.
There were a few who have suggested that I delete the "rape" comments, but this is a free world, and I do believe in free speech, so the comments won't be deleted.
But.. you're reading an incest/taboo story.. which is already uhhh.. TABOO.. if you aren't into such things.. I'd suggest you stay away from this particular category, no?
I know I'll get slammed for my remarks, but so be it. I hate to make enemies anywhere I go, but sometimes, you can't please everyone.
Take care all, and happy reading.
Dirty trash
Happy reading? Not with this kind of sick perversion!
Lukas
Cool
I thought this story was fun. Don't particularly like the gay aspect, but fuckit! Everyone got off.
rape
hey idiot writer the iterotica staff do not reveiw stories if they did there wouldn't be so many stories with spelling errors if you had a brain you would have put this in the nonconsent area on your own after all that is why they have it also use an editor from now on
Is this what you sick fucks believe? That if you persist in the rape that the victim will enjoy it?
There is a nonconsent section for this.
You must have a very sad shitty life to write this absolute crap. This just be removed from Literotica. Rape of either sex, is a shameful display of a controlling character. Rapists of either sex should be severely beaten to within an inch of their miserable lives for they are no better than useless dog shit and should then be terminated.
Have a great day asshole.
Id the asshole annnoy hates your story, it must be good
therefore I gave you a 5
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