All Comments on 'Bachelor Party for Two Ch. 01'

This is quite a ;ap dance the lad is getting.

I'm guessing there is going to be two women in a 69 pretty soon.

This was really hot. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow this is a hot story can't wait for the rest

Wow! I've never been moved to post before but that was really hot!!! Thanks for sharing it.

when is the next part coming?

Dying to read the next part of this one, have to say that this is one of the hottest I've read on Literotica to date, and wanting to know exactly where it'll go next with the "second show". Its been a while since part one was posted so... please! Can we have the rest soon? XD

Great story but wishing/hoping it stays as just the threesome!

Excellent, a real tease and a disapointment that part 2 isn't there (yet??)

Bursting, waiting for the??

Loved the story.

Please before I turn blue and they pop finish the story.

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Just wait for all the men haters to slam it.

They will point out that only cuckold stories belong here.

Really a good read and exciting enough to be real and fantasy fodder too heh

Please don't leave everyone hanging

Steve

MORE MORE MORE!!!

Far too unrealistic to be sexy.

Everything is boring after ingesting gallons of semen

I want him to get what he wants. I love a man who gets satisfied with another woman, especially if it simultaneously turns on/humiliates his wife/girlfriend. Please keep writing!

is there a chapter 2?

PLEASE write a chapter 2 SOON! That story is so hot!!!

Either finish what you start,or don't bother at all!

A tease with no ending! FUCK this shit! ~ 1 (Would be a BIG FAT ZERO,if that was an option!)

Great story, but it needs an ending. I'm looking forward to it.

Noooooooo!!!!!!! Damn it, where is Ch2? It's been over 10, isn't that enough for another chapter or three?

Just messin with ya. A new installment would be awesome, but it's still a hell of a good start, a super easy 5* read. Thanks for writing this, loved it.

Anytime you see bachelor or bachelorette in a story, you know it sucks.

Chapter 2!

Think how bad it would be if someone else had to write it. On the other hand, if you tell me where you want it to go, tell me, i’ll Write it up and you can edit it. Or take it over and assume credit.

great story, where is part 2???

That was really hot. I wish Ch 2 was out

Fantastic story. Unfortunately abandoned. Author ghosted for 5 years then showed up with a different story.. Andh now has been MIA for 11. If we don't count a modification to his profile 6 years ago. Hopefully all is well.