of this reader, I found your poem to be the beautiful reflection of trust found in his eyes by someone that has seen the ugliness of lies in others' before. You always seem to pen about the good in a relationship, Sander - and I much enjoy that aspect of your writing. Thank you for yet another look.
The poem was very well written and touching, an easily read and grasping poem. I just followed the finger point from new poems review
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