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by Penisvixen

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 5 years ago

I really liked “and come undone.” because of what you wrote before the line. In fact, I might have ended the poem there.

PenisvixenPenisvixenover 5 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comment. Appreciate the feedback.

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