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ZMP~ a tree limb lay ...

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/18/05

a tree limb

Only you could bring a tree limb back to life and give it a deeper purpose, another nice zen poem, Art.

A Tree limb lay,
like thoughts fallen yesterday.

S~

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Non-erotic...

this one could go either way art...if you think on it a bit! LOL Erotic or non-erotic! ;)
very good, liked it as always....
YOUR THE POET...AND I KNOW IT!
Kisses,
T

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by Anonymous04/18/05

a great lesson

bringing no frequency of yesterday into the here/now...expressed nicely my friend...IHB/blue

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by Anonymous04/18/05

I love the expressions

A beautiful thought provoking poem. I love the way you can bring visuals. Beauty in everyday things.


~Macy

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by Scott N. Leavitt04/18/05

**5**

WOW!!! another great one. And about tree limbs. This is truly a ZMP!!!
Thankyou ZMA!!!

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by Bridget6904/19/05

As always...

a great blend of both natural and logical elements. Nice metaphors!

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by Wanton Vixxxen04/19/05

A zen lullaby...

this one. You always bring out the peaceful in Me with your zen mountain poetry, Art. And this one was no exception. I'm ready to be tucked into bed now

Tranquil Vixxx

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by Anonymous04/24/05

~

Smiling within a serenity soaked soul... what else can be said
Du Lac~

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