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Woohee!
What a treat! The third chapter up in the same weekend and just as the first two chapters this chapter also has me looking out for the next one! You write really well, I really like your style, but most of all you give your characters a really good background! Keep it up, but I'm sure you will :-)
I loved it!
I had read the first installment and had been waiting for the 2nd...and then I see the 3rd!
Read parts 2 & 3 and I absolutely loved them! I can't wait to see part 4.
Nicely done..
I like your writing style. Keep it up.
This story is turning out to be more
romantic and beautiful than I could have imagined. Thank you for telling Rainey's story. You have really hit the nail on the head with how a woman feels when she's uncertain of herself. Excellent development of lead characters and their friends. I still don't believe I will be able to sleep until I know what happens next. Your story reads like one of those novels you simply cannot put down. You know what I mean?
wow...
this is amazing!!!! I love her struggle, its soo real! ... update soon pliz!
Outstanding!
What a compelling read, so insightful! The characters are superbly constructed, so tangible and evolving in such a realistic manner. Certainly one of the best pieces I have read on this site - Keep up the excellent work, I'm in equisite suspense waiting for your following installments!
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I love this story, it has such talent in it. I hope to hear something about this two very soon, thank you
please come back!!
This serie is one of the jewels of this site, I love it. I can't wait the best part to begin, they can be very very hot together. thanks
Better and Better!!!!
This just keeps getting better and better. You go girl!!!
I'm in love
with your story!!! It is incredibly easy to relate to Rainy. I love your writing style, keep it up!!!
Holy sh** that was engrossing
Full time authors should take notes from you
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