All Comments on 'Sands of the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
It's the little things that spoil a good story.

How can he do all those things to her back when she is lying on her back?

Don't you read what you have written? How can you make such a mistake?

Bridget69Bridget69about 18 years ago
Erotic encounter...

on an exotic oasis.

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