All Comments on 'Meeting Miyuki'

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Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601over 5 years ago
Good but...

This story is hot, but your narrative “my enormous cock” makes you sound arrogant. Perhaps having the girl say that would sound better.

Keep it coming, though.

barepussloverbarepussloverover 5 years ago
Possibably A Nice Story Line!

Slow Down and develop the relationship!! Will wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
cute story dear!

Hello from Greece! Very cute story dear! However, no one was cared about STDs? sexual transmission diseases or unwanted pregnancy?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

"tight like a teenage girls ass"?! Mate this is a 44 year old you're having say this, try and be less gross and creepy

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204over 1 year ago

This is a great story, posted as part 1? Hope you have Part 2 ready to post? Your fans are all waiting for the sequel.

nighthawk22204nighthawk2220410 months ago

Hmmm? Still waiting for part 2? Have they picked a name for the baby yet?

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