All Comments on 'Girth'

Hope there is more. I love a Dominate man.

great start. keep it going. love the dom/sub blackmail plot

No ANAL!!

"ZERO" out of five stars.

I have a friend with a big thick cock. After I first sucked him, with my wife watching, I was hooked. Now, I've been made queer for his cock or any other man's big cock. To date, I've sucked off over 20 men.

I, too have a big thick girthy cut penis with full bulbous head on it. Many queer men at the gym admire it and have asked me if they can suck it.

I probably would submit too to juicy big cock

Give him your ass next time.

Very poorly written. One second it's in first person, then in third, then back to first. One moment the guy's name is Adam and then it's Adrian.

You should really get your thoughts together before writing a story in the future.

Hi Anonymous, thanks for the polite critique. I've found the one mention of 'Adrian', but I can't seem to find the POV issues. The first half was written in third-person, and I had to re-write it, so I'm not too surprised. If someone can point me towards the POV issue, I'll amend it.

Nothing wrong with sucking on a fat hard cock. The camera angle made this an old worn out cliché.

i loved the boldness of the girth. would love to read more. keep up the writing, you are on the right track.

RF

Poor story line, he opens the door for one friend and Adrian disappears and Adam is there instead. Makes no sense how Adam got in and Adrian got out with being seen as unless they used a window. Disappointing.

I liked Girth. I particularly enjoy stories about "straight" men who get bent over and go gay. I'm double-hard if their sexual humiliation is witnessed by others - spouse, family, friends, coworkers, so by all means let Adam fuck Tom in front of Sarah!

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I wish I had that cock in my holes three times a day for training, and too be forced to do it.

Wow wish i was the one getting it and injoying the milk...

That was so hot when he feed the guy his cum on his thumb, after he asked if he enjoyed swallowing his cum, the guy nods yes and sucks his dick,so fucking hot

Loved it, so hot when he feed the guy his cum off his thumb, hotter when he said, I bet you swallowed my cum? Guy just nods and sucks his dick, awesome, would love Sara to catch her guy sucking dick and being a complete bitch right before her eyes, licking the guys ass? Iam straight but don’t sound it or feel it now, love your story and hope you see my comment

I just read the last comment, I think the so called straight guy, who wants a response from the author, wants to show his appreciation for the story, by giving the writer a blow job, lmfao😃

Could she have known her guy would fall for and to his knees for her friends big cock? Did she se it up?

Let your girlfriend have a buddy stay over and treat him right, suck his dick and eats his cum , now that’s a host that goes out of his way to please

Suggest changing it!

sounds like a set up, but still it was so well sritten. and it could use more chapters for me also.

This was so hot! Please make more

You got to continue this one 👍👍

Great story! I love a story where a guy with a big cock turns a straight man into a submissive cocksucker. That's just the natural order of things. I'm glad you didn't have him take his ass also. For me sucking a cock is all I ever want. I have no desire to get my ass fucked. I love being a cocksucker and will suck your cock over and over as much as you want and swallow all your com. I just don't find anal appealing in the least. Thank you for writing a great cocksucking story too many are too predictable and go straight to ass fucking which ruins the story for me. Authors should at least make readers wait until future chapters for the shit packers and give us cocksuckers a story or two to enjoy sucking a load out of those big cocks.

I wish it was me taking that thick cock.

Love your story, truly enjoy being a submissive cocksucker

Will there be more chapters coming? Will these two men become lovers?

Adam is a supreme top but bitch, that phone leaves this house over... You know the rest, lololol. I need some dick and cum after reading this story.

I need to see a part 2. I wanna see him get fucked by Adam and maybe Adams friends too!

Yes, some men are meant to be sucked. The vast majority are meant to suck, whether they know it or not. Adam is one of those alpha males we just expect to be sucked He’s probably fucking the girlfriend to.

Wish I could find a BWC with Girth to suck ! I have never had one bigger than 6" Looking in TN

Yours in TN