Stories here that I like a LOT rate a '4.' I've been saving the '5' for especially fine writing and excitement. You captured the physical action beautifully and your focus on emotion was very rare. Great work!!
Excellent writing. You portrayed great feeling in this hot story. I can't wait to read some more of your other stories.
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You caught the emotion.
Stories here that I like a LOT rate a '4.' I've been saving the '5' for especially fine writing and excitement. You captured the physical action beautifully and your focus on emotion was very rare. Great work!!
great feeling to this story
Excellent writing. You portrayed great feeling
in this hot story. I can't wait to read some more of your other stories.
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