All Comments on 'Family Fun Begins Ch. 07'

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don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Very, Very, Very, Very good!

This is eroticsm as its best! Just because men and women, or girls and boys, are related does not mean they cannot fuck if they have the capability to do so. And if a guy fucks a girl and she get preggie, so much the better. Adolescent/puberty aged males and females should fuck at will and even live together to fuck each others' offspring as soon as that offspring can produce babies, without regards to any kind of birth control, if they so desire.

WFD6301WFD6301almost 19 years ago
VERY VERY GOOD

I have read all seven chapters. The were all very, very, very good. You need to work on your grammer a little. Proof read a little more, but it was not so bad that you do not know what is going on. They were all very good. PLEASE keep up the good work and continue writing. Thank for all the great stories. You are a very good author. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
impregnenting mother and sister

it is very good story,father is very kind,he allowed his wife and daughter to fuck his son and impregnented,please continue the story,how father manage the relatives and friends that his wife and dauther is pregnent

David48David48over 18 years ago
Whoa there Don

Adults at play. Not "boys and girls" Don boy! A very horny, hot story this. Great series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Verry Good

Verry good!Thanks for letting him make them pregnant

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Made Crazy

Hi,

Your stories are making me crazy and I like incest stories. Please try to expand in writting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wow it made me wet

it was lovely i read all of it n had to use all my fingers i was so fucking wet that my pussy was on fire all teh best want to know more about it .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
WHAT A HOT SERIES!!!!

What a terrifics series of stories. The best kind of incest stories are the kind where the whole family gets in on the act. There's nothing like a hot family orgy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Confused????

If Paul (the father) had a vasectomy, How come he was filling their pussies with cum?????. I loved the story still very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
To The Confused Aussie

Vasectomy fortunately does'nt cut off the cum-the semen. It just does'nt carry any of those little baby-making buggers-the sperm. Provides fucking free from fear of knocking up ones mother, daughter or sister-a great stride in reducing the number of idiots in this already crazy world. A boon to mother-fuckers and all other incestuous lovers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
OUT OF GAS

Hey, you seem to have made plenty of mistakes in narration and with the use of various words in your stories,read before you post, even then if you dont find any mistake, send it to a editor for help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Lord!

Fuck your english, for 1ce. (the errors I make are 4 brevity's sake) The motherfucker's proud of knocking up his sister along with his mother? Now, I've heard everything!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Write your own

You people bitching about grammar and spelling need to submit you own stories and shut the fuck up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
It's much better than

NOT much better then...

Also, teased his prostrate[prostate]

The sex scenes turned into an over the top unbelievable mess. Get some help with your writing. English is obviously not your language.

blueyedbobblueyedbobover 11 years ago
i love family incest tales!!

however, after awhile, it just got boring,,,sorry, but it kind of just jumbled all together and got to be be too much and soon i was skipping paragraphs just to get to the end to find out what harry would say about the women being pregnant,,,i can forgive spelling errors,,,but story is everything,,,suspension of disbelief,,

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