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by Anonymous

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by Angeline04/19/05

Great!

Wasn't sure where you were going with it till I got to the end of the poem, but really good Boo. Spare and clever. :)

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by My Erotic Tale04/20/05

thump thump

tumbles the tumbleweed..hehehehe
a thumping good poem

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by Bridget6904/20/05

A thumping...

and tumbling good read!

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by Wanton Vixxxen04/20/05

Titillating tumbleweed...

and all that goes "thump! thump! thump!" in the night. That was a very effective surprise ending; the words few, but climactic - in more ways than one Great work on this poem, Boo!

Vixxx

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