All Comments on 'The Neighborhood Toy'

Very good short story .Thank you .

Can't wait to see what Mom and Son do next in the Neighborhood.

Not Mr. Roger's Neighborhood

Wow, had me wanting to be the Mother. So wrong, but so so right.

I loved it! Only wish it was longer. Maybe you could do a followup chapter and have him bring home his mom's best friend for a hot threeway!

As I was reading the story I so wanted to be Ben and my mom as the mom in the story. And, I so wanted my mom to feel my cock inside her pussy and my cum shooting into that glorious sweet cunt. Then I felt my cock get harder and then I had to relieve myself. So, as I jerked my cock I called out my mom's name and I actually felt the familiar sensation of my cock releasing its baby making juice as it squirted into her love canal.

GREAT, but too short. More, more!

Thanks for sharing.

No complaints about the writing but for Me it was more of an boiled wank-off Story then of a believable mother that cares for what comes after the fucking. Also there was little to no description (or conversation) on the sensation of fist time ever seeing his own mother naked, acting lewd and depraved until having your own dick in your moms pussy! For Me reading it it felt like a surprising event but Not too uncommon.

Is Daddy ok with it?

This is good just like it is.

5*

... Just down and dirty lust. I LOVED the dirty talk. "Come over here...motherfucker" - I damn near came in my shorts. 5 stars and wish I could give more!

"Andrea knew she had to add quickly"

Vice not vise

Oh momma momma.

The use of vise, in this case, was correct.

Vise = clamping / holding device.

Vice = an illegal or immoral act or activity, such as prostitution, gambling, etc.

Give us some more chapters. Good story