All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girl'

I trust that there is more cumming....

What a woodie after that tale.

Very well written, and very erotic...I'd love to see more on the cop/daughter theme, maybe with some leather and bondage. I enjoyed the dad's perspective more than the daughters...all in all, really enjoyed it!

I'm soaking wet just waiting for more...

I'm soaking wet just waiting for more...

hot..hot ..hot..I'm dripping

I always love your stories, good job

Nice writing!

Too weird to suddenly have her telling it.

Stan

The intro was too long and lengthy...and the build up was way too long as well. Next time get to the point quicker.

OK, I'm impressed*smile*, as always I love your work, Sir. Thanks for something new to read and I can't wait for more. I do agree also with one of the readers suggestions, nothings quite as hot as daddys little girl getting a spankin...*smile*. as always your fan in Texas, naynay

i like they way of write, its too hot

Absolutly loved it, made me cum several times!!!!!! thank u for the best story i have read in ages.

Rather formula really, but done well, as this story is, is a real classic. Sissy and Daddy screwing like rabbits...Gotta love it!

loved the story, but as a tattoo artist,i was annoyed by the lack of after care for her tattoo... swimming hours afterwards? so killed my pleasure...oh well..

i loved it! i came with both of you!!! thak you!

Loved it!

Very hot story. But then and than are not interchangeable.

I just came so fucking hard!!! I'm dripping, I need more!

Every time I read about how a girl has been penetrated for the first time it's always the same thing.

There's no way that it happens like it's just another time.

It's so emotional and painful tthat it is something that can never be

duplicated

It doesn't matter if the girl wants it to happen or if she is being seduced the bottom line is It Hurts Like Hell.

Maybe child birth can hurt more but I don't think so.

I haven't had a baby yet so I can't compare

What I lost my virginity it was the most pain I'd ever felt

I thought that I was ready to experience it and the person who I was dating told me that they were experienced in having a girl for the first time and that it wouldn't hurt me if I was really ready to do it

I took their word for it and as it was beginning and the end of the penis was spreading my vulva I knew that I was in trouble. It felt like having a tooth pulled without any novicane and that's before my hyman was broken or in my case ripped

I bled and the pain was unbearable.

There is no happy ending like we read about like in this story.

My pussy was so sore that I couldn't pee without it hurting for days much less than continued to be penetrated

It was something like two weeks before I tried it again but I have to admit it was a lot better the next time.

When I say better I mean that it didn't hurt me like the first time

So what I'm saying is

I would like to see a story that tells about what it's really like the first time that a girl loses her virginity

Well it's sad that it was like that for you. :(. To include a version like yours the story would probably have to be pretty long and in depth, as opposed to a fun, sexy story.

The fact is that all girls are different, some get fucked over with bad luck like you and have lots of pain, others feel virtually no pain and anywhere in between. I think your version is less frequent though. Pain tolerance differs from person to person, of course, but a larger roll (setting aside if you have a tiny vagina) is what kind of hymen you have. Personally, if I were you, I would go to my OBGYN and kick her ass, hard, for not spotting a trouble hymen and offering to do something about it for you!

Oh, and as a side note, man was that a weird, abrupt ending to the story!

Loved it! My first time was hot erotic with an older man. No pain as I had been fingered and he used toys in me so it felt great to finally FUCK a cock.

Please keep writing its so hot!!

good story, i know things like this happen as i seduced my daddy more or less like this, don't know why you mentioned about daddy being a cop, it added nothing to the story.

First half was rather good and second half was only just good.

Adrian is a man's name, Adrienne would be better.

Oh and a sole is a fish.

Great story. The only thing that I didn't care about was how long it took before they actually had sex. I thought that it should have happened a lot sooner. After all its something that happened between a father and his daughter. That's what the story is about.

The part about Ashley losing her virginity reminds me of your story about Jessica and Kelly and how Jessica gave her virginity to Kelly

Both stories don't tell about how it really is when a girl loses her virginity.

You didn't explain how traumatic a experience it is when a girl is penetrated for the first time. The pain is almost unbearable and there's nothing to compare it to except maybe child birth. I know that its only a story, but I'd love to hear how it really is when a girl is penetrated for the first time. The crying and the way that a girl's vagina bleeds when her hymen is penetrated and how she is able to feel the head of the penis touching her cervix when its fully inside of her cunt.

I think that it would have been a better ending if her daddy had cum inside of her and she wasn't on the pill

Just knowing that she could have gotten pregnant would have added to the story

There's just something about a daddy impregnated his daughter and what happens when he does that I love to hear about

It's not like it dosen't happen because it happens every day to some girl and her daddy

I know because it happened to me.

I was impressed with your story. The way that you described Ashley, was well written. She is a brat, no doubt about it. A spoiled little girl who knows how to manipulate her daddy, so she can get whatever she wants and she wants her daddy's cock more than anything. For a girl who only casually dates, she sure knew how to suck a cock. I would have liked it, if you described the way that her pussy looks. I can only imagine how it looked. You did described the way that Jenny's pussy looks in your story about My Best Friends Mother and I still have a image in my mind about Jenny's sweet little bald cunt. I did like the fact that Ashley was a squirter. That helped me to imagine what her pussy looks and smells like. I can just imagine how it would have smelled like, with her coming all over the bed and soaking the sheets with her pussy juice. It would be enough to make anyone who smells pussy like this, want to fuck her. I was hoping that they would continue with their incest relationship and her mother coming home early and catches them fucking

in her massage bed and you could describe how She is horrified by seeing her husband's cock going in her daughter's tight little cunt and Ashley begging him to cum inside of her.

Just something to think about

Keep writing. I absolutely love your stories

Ended too soon. Adrian seems like a bitch. Guess the girls weekend is a flirting fyvking one