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The Unused Room Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Baby78901/20/11

Wow

The way you write is amazing, I wish I could write like you these stories almost had me crying I love them so much Love Baby789

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by Silentbystander07/21/11

Third chapter and the first that didn't make me cry

...much anyway. Dead lovers always get to me. You're a fantastic writer.

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by dinkyboots05/06/12

i agree with the other comment i didnt cry either

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by Anonymous08/31/13

Good try

This story has some nice elements to it, but plays out too much like a soap opera. You don't take the time to flush anything out and it all comes off as cheap and far to coincidental.

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