All Comments on 'Mommy's Caged Boy Toy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
1 star

'road'......

rdoolittlerdoolittleover 5 years ago
Alternate ending?

Loved the story...Something said or done just before climax, resulting in a ruined orgasm...Back into chastity.

Deejay121Deejay121over 5 years ago
Basic story line is good

it is obvious that English is not your first language, the basic story is good, but with an editor checking for grammatical errors and terms and correcting them could be a lot more intense, that is my only reason for only giving three stars

spaceinvaderspaceinvaderover 5 years ago
Great

Amazing and so hot. Love Dommy Mommy sissy son stories. I'm so glad he got relief. Sometimes it is nice to get proper relief from chastity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

'How could I not say no' is a double negative. He had to say no.

Awful grammar. I noticed road too.

Past tense of to ride is rode.

TonyBeetsTonyBeetsover 4 years ago
Super hot!

Awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

now that's charity the right way! Awesome story

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