by beaverhunt
It is hard to write dialogue. I assume the writer is black.
Although the author does not have a full bio, it does not matter look at their story descriptions and the first paragraph of the story. The author clearly describes the author of this story. The dialogue is clear and easy to read.
I am confused by your comments and what you meant by them. Negative comments by an anonymous commentor usually doesn't mean much, and coments such as yours indicate that you probably can't read!
True, it is hard to write dialogue. However, this dialogue reads pretty reasonably to my eyes..
I thought it a cute little story. Thanks for writing; thanks for sharing.
-A different anonymous