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Kelly's New Hot Tub Ch. 02

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by Anonymous11/27/05

How Dare You!

How could you write such vile and dirty stories? Couldn't read fast enough! Did you write another chapter? You are a really great writer!!! I came so many times imagining what I could do with my brothers or sister that it boggles the mind!!! Might even throw in the father.
It was really great reading! Keep up the good works!
dicinas2

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by Anonymous12/24/05

A very good start

Hope to see moore from this storie . The one who said his 2 yr old brother could write a better storie I was thinking if it was his big brother lol

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by Anonymous01/13/13

Introduced as wife in the first chapter...

And sister in the second. Try to be aware, author. Otherwise a good story.

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