All Comments on 'Sonnet One'

so your partner date is unaware, TK U MLJ LV NV

One of my favorite things to do ... To sit in a bar or restaurant with shorts on and no underwear, while she sits in a short skirt with no panties on, and flash each other! Done it a few times; always so exciting! It's led to some interesting activity ... either when we go home, on the way home, or a couple of times, in the restaurant ... Thank you for capturing the mood and excitement in your poem!

My compliments on creating a saucy, sexy English sonnet, deedeefree. The form is not as easy to write as one might think -- nice work.