I dislike physical revenge stories for the most part but this one got my blood pumping. It was quite emotional and I felt bad for the husband as he was discovering what was happening.
As a personal preference, I like the good guy to move on and find true happiness & the bad guy to be sorry for what they lost. Throwing your life away over someone who doesnt love you means they won though. Maybe Im too cold blooded and calculating - I just cant see fucking everyting up over a piece of ass (she became just that after he discovered what was going - she should have no longer been someone he loved and was willing to do anything for).
Hopefully there will be some kind of twist in part 2 but I cant see how. Looks like the husband is fucked even if it turns out the wife was being blackmailed or some other unrealistic shit like that (almost anything I can think of to be used into blackmailing her into a long term affair proves she dosent really love him imo. If its sex, 'I kept fucking him because I didnt want to hurt you' is stupid & anything else would involve criminal type activities. Hopefully the man she loves would be the one person she could share with if she was in legal troubles).
Any scenario I can think of means that his wife didnt love him and therefore isnt worth fucking his life up over. Ill give you the benefit of the doubt until I see part 2 though.
This is how most people feel when they are cheated on. I can't see anyway for him have a life after killing her lover. That makes the price that he will pay be too high for her crime. It will be interesting to see how you write chapter 2.
This story could go only one way. Whateve does occur he will be in prison. Since she is fucking around he may not care about prison.
But, regardless, He made a BIG mistake. He should have just accosted her and then paid a friendly visit to his lawyer. She fucked over him and now, he'll be fucked over for sure!!
I liked this story because of the reality it showed. Interesting to see a little violent revenge for a change rather than the normal slap on the wrist. Keep it up.
Unfortuanately he is pretty well fucked! Unless his wife goes along with some plan. In real life this is the kind of real shit that happens when this kind of personal devastating betrayl happens. It will be interesting to see what you do with it!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
I loved the story. I do think that as a smart marine he might have waited to get his revenge. He could use the photos to go to a lawyer, and divorce Janet; and also give copies to Marty's wife so she divorces him. After he is divorced from Janet, I can see him shooting Marty in the groin, but not killing him. Ruinging Marty's sex life, and forcing him to live with that problem is a great revenge. By killing him, he has placed himself in a great deal of trouble for a couple of cheaters. It would serve Janet to live a depressed, and misrable life for a long time after this.
Great story I like the revenge, Killing the gut is a little over the top though. If he was that good of a marine and with the pictures of his wife going into her lovers house and the wifes prints on the gun who knows... loves kill each other
that's real life! a man has to recover his lost manhood. it's bad enough his wife betrays him,. it gets worse when the guy is a so called friend. great story. one man is dead. i really would like to know how he'll get out of this mess.
Nice job. I wonder if the people saying to just divorce her and move on ever really loved anyone with a deep passion?
OK, she cheated on him, he divorces her and lives happily
ever after. I should vote for this scenario because that is
exactly what I did. Even my lawyer told me I should kill my
ex. He said I would serve two to three years and be done with her, but if she lives...she will make my life a hell for many years. He was right.
Yeah, it all turned out....somewhat ok after many years or
so, but it was not a fun time.
As for shooting the guy...I have NO problem with that. If
more husbands did that, fewer guys would want to screw married women. If you don't believe that, I wonder what
color the sky is in your world.
As for the slut...I dunno. He has NOT thought this out too
well, just shoot her and kill himself. Save the taxpayers
the cost of a trial?
I will be curious to see how this goes...I really like the
writers stuff so far.
Geez, you people who are so happy to see a murder: is your self-worth entirely derived from your dicks? This IS NOT an eye for an eye. You cheering guys: is infidelity an executable offense? Or is it only executable if the wife is the cheater?
Christ, I had something similar happen to me. It took me about a week to realize that my wife didn't love me (at least the way I thought she did). It took me about another week for it to sink in that I guess I didn't love her anymore either (hey she treated me like shit. How could you keep loving someone like that?) After that it was easy: drop the bitch with no remorse (except for the kids, of course). The good result? I married someone else who treated me right and she became a drunk. Life can work out okay sometimes.
Gentlemen, your self worth should be internalized, not dependent on how a particular person outside yourself acts. Murder is the act of a weak person, not a strong one.
Be a man. Throw the bitch out if you have to, but get on with your life.
I'll bet that this scenario happens a lot more, in real life, than the "cuckold who licks her lovers cum out her after discovering her cheating on him" bullshit that often passes for an erotic story on this site.
After wading through the sludge that passes for a loving wife story, it's kind of refreshing to see a story of someone going over the top in the other direction. That doesn't mean it is right, it means its a story that is closer to real life than fantasy.
I thought about this story over night, and think that if he wanted to hurt Marty, it would have been better if he cold cocked Marty in the shower, and then kicked Marty MANY times in the groin - perferably with steel toed boots! Marty caused him pain and grief by the use of his genitals, so Marty should experience pain ( if not the complete ruin) of his genitals. Do you think a jury will convict the husband when he shows the pictures, and says he was in an absolute rage over the cheating? He'll probably get off for that, while murder will be difficult to defend. I can see him leaving his cheating wife, and divorcing her. He might then want to give her a gun with 1 bullet ( after he moves so she doesn't know where he is ) and send a note with it telling her their is only one solution to her grief - suicide. The best revenge is to live well, and hopefully the cheater has a crappy life.
He was a marine and had been married for only 4 years, he had to love he after being around men so much. She didn't even wait for the seven year itch to take over. Hell they were supposed to be still a young couple. I don't think he went too far unless he kills her. Because if he don't, then he goes to jail for murder, then what can he do from jail while she is out free. He must take her out, because once she finds out that Marty has been killed, she will suspect her husband, then she will become cause him problems. Author please continue.....
He was a marine and had been married for only 4 years, he had to love he after being around men so much. She didn't even wait for the seven year itch to take over. Hell they were supposed to be still a young couple. I don't think he went too far unless he kills her. Because if he don't, then he goes to jail for murder, then what can he do from jail while she is out free. He must take her out, because once she finds out that Marty has been killed, she will suspect her husband, then she will become cause him problems. Author please continue.....
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Anonymous07/26/06
The law?
Such violence is rightly illegal. Even having been a marine, really an honourable service, doesn't justify his action. The follow up about his time in prison is going to be pretty dull!
All we see is the husband shooting marty and him questioning his wife but no explanations from the wife so when do we hear her side of what happened was she having an affair or were they setting up a surprise birthday for the her husband and marty helping her set it up at the country club.
Pat
Atlanta,Ga.
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Anonymous04/13/08
It's real
Yep, you got a gun, you lose control, you pull a trigger... and all wimps in this universe is going to shake their heads and say no no... But it happens, I'm not saying this is the solution. But let us guess, he's sitting alone ten years ending with a suicide after being your wimpy brother. Or he doing jail ten years for killing the fuc*r that destroyed his marriage ( his wife included of course :).. Coming out with some backbone, not killing himself.. I'd take the later course if it was me... cheers Yoron.
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Anonymous03/01/09
Heh
Pretty funny, some of the comments. Some of the more vocal ones protesting the outcome are probably from those who'd prefer to see hubby eating the lovers' cum out of his "loving wifes'" snatch. Heaven forbid there should be any consequences for doing what she and lover boy did! Personally, I wouldn't have killed the guy...I suspect I'd have kneecapped him and probably cut his nuts off, which I'm sure the cucksters would tell me is too much, but guess what, sometimes the consequences don't fit the actions, and when someone is wronged, they tend to act rather than sit and think about it. Ditto for real men who won't settle for being a nutless wonder to a worthless whore. Maybe the moral of this story should be "don't fuck his wife if you want to keep your life."
getting revenge is one thing, but killing someone over a cheating bitch is another. He didn't rape this slut, she fucked Marty of her own free will. So why kill him, her maybe but him and not yourself. Why end your life over a slut.
If you keep a gun at hand opportunitys to use it will offer themselves up! Perhaps he can offer temporary insanity as a successful defence since there was no cooling off period...
It is sort like the business of looking at the DVD of your wife and lover that the PI has made.. If you ever want to be happy, don't!
You think? You don't kill the lover. You kill the lover and the cheating whore as they are fucking. No, maybe not. Wait. There's a chapter 2! Oh boy. Let's see what happens...
That was a whole bunch over-the-top. I understand his feeling of betrayal and I'm all for blowing up the lovers, but when you do it in this manner, you basically sign your own death warrant. Why would you want to punish yourself that badly for something that you didn't do? Divorce her, try to screw her in the divorce, tell the other man's wife, file lawsuits or just take everything you can get your hands on and leave. But to either face the death penalty or life in prison seems excessive, even for a fantasy story. Maybe in chapter 2 this was his "dream" revenge and he gets smarter.
I enjoy the BTB stories. However, I don't like it when the innocent husband dies or is put in jail. A man has to be smarter than that. I would make the cheaters suffer as much as possible, and figure out a way to come out in the clear. I don't mind that the guy was killed, he deserved it, BUT the husband has to be a lot smarter.
Didn't Marty have a job? Obviously his wife did. Did a neighbor never tell Marty's wife about the same strange car in front of their house on Thursday afternoons? I can't imagine where chapter 2 goes.
I f he goes to prison over this, so be it, at least it will be with a clear conscience. should have used a shotgun, and only shot his crotch apart, he'd have bled to death before help got there.
but how can you love a sad story? it's a sorry state of affairs. he'll probably go to jail, but, he wouldn't be any good to anyone else, or himself for a long time.
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Anonymous09/06/15
Thank You
I am so tired of pussy victims. The Glock was the perfect touch. I am going to read pt2 now but this story was great. Sometimes you have to do what you have to do .
I like stories where husbands are willing to kill the man who is destroying his marriage. It happens far more in real life than in fiction. In fiction most of the husbands are scared of the consequences, the courts, and the law. Not so much in real life.
"but she wouldn't talk to me and I had no proof of anything so I decided to see what would happen" - She flat-out LIED to you when she called, there are multiple calls from Marty, whose wife she doesn't get along with, who conveniently left your golf group, and who she was maybe a little too close to at the last Country Club dance,
What do you need, to see them in bed together?
And why, oh why didn't he confront her when she lied?
English
Not bad
I dislike physical revenge stories for the most part but this one got my blood pumping. It was quite emotional and I felt bad for the husband as he was discovering what was happening.
As a personal preference, I like the good guy to move on and find true happiness & the bad guy to be sorry for what they lost. Throwing your life away over someone who doesnt love you means they won though. Maybe Im too cold blooded and calculating - I just cant see fucking everyting up over a piece of ass (she became just that after he discovered what was going - she should have no longer been someone he loved and was willing to do anything for).
Hopefully there will be some kind of twist in part 2 but I cant see how. Looks like the husband is fucked even if it turns out the wife was being blackmailed or some other unrealistic shit like that (almost anything I can think of to be used into blackmailing her into a long term affair proves she dosent really love him imo. If its sex, 'I kept fucking him because I didnt want to hurt you' is stupid & anything else would involve criminal type activities. Hopefully the man she loves would be the one person she could share with if she was in legal troubles).
Any scenario I can think of means that his wife didnt love him and therefore isnt worth fucking his life up over. Ill give you the benefit of the doubt until I see part 2 though.
Good Story!! Waiting for the next chapter.
This is how most people feel when they are cheated on. I can't see anyway for him have a life after killing her lover. That makes the price that he will pay be too high for her crime. It will be interesting to see how you write chapter 2.
Mistake!
This story could go only one way. Whateve does occur he will be in prison. Since she is fucking around he may not care about prison.
But, regardless, He made a BIG mistake. He should have just accosted her and then paid a friendly visit to his lawyer. She fucked over him and now, he'll be fucked over for sure!!
interesting chain of events
I liked this story because of the reality it showed. Interesting to see a little violent revenge for a change rather than the normal slap on the wrist. Keep it up.
Now this is real life! Thanks!
Unfortuanately he is pretty well fucked! Unless his wife goes along with some plan. In real life this is the kind of real shit that happens when this kind of personal devastating betrayl happens. It will be interesting to see what you do with it!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
Great
I loved the story. I do think that as a smart marine he might have waited to get his revenge. He could use the photos to go to a lawyer, and divorce Janet; and also give copies to Marty's wife so she divorces him. After he is divorced from Janet, I can see him shooting Marty in the groin, but not killing him. Ruinging Marty's sex life, and forcing him to live with that problem is a great revenge. By killing him, he has placed himself in a great deal of trouble for a couple of cheaters. It would serve Janet to live a depressed, and misrable life for a long time after this.
Great
Great story I like the revenge, Killing the gut is a little over the top though. If he was that good of a marine and with the pictures of his wife going into her lovers house and the wifes prints on the gun who knows... loves kill each other
shit happens
that's real life! a man has to recover his lost manhood. it's bad enough his wife betrays him,. it gets worse when the guy is a so called friend. great story. one man is dead. i really would like to know how he'll get out of this mess.
thanks!
Good so far.....
Nice job. I wonder if the people saying to just divorce her and move on ever really loved anyone with a deep passion?
OK, she cheated on him, he divorces her and lives happily
ever after. I should vote for this scenario because that is
exactly what I did. Even my lawyer told me I should kill my
ex. He said I would serve two to three years and be done with her, but if she lives...she will make my life a hell for many years. He was right.
Yeah, it all turned out....somewhat ok after many years or
so, but it was not a fun time.
As for shooting the guy...I have NO problem with that. If
more husbands did that, fewer guys would want to screw married women. If you don't believe that, I wonder what
color the sky is in your world.
As for the slut...I dunno. He has NOT thought this out too
well, just shoot her and kill himself. Save the taxpayers
the cost of a trial?
I will be curious to see how this goes...I really like the
writers stuff so far.
Beyond Macho
Geez, you people who are so happy to see a murder: is your self-worth entirely derived from your dicks? This IS NOT an eye for an eye. You cheering guys: is infidelity an executable offense? Or is it only executable if the wife is the cheater?
Christ, I had something similar happen to me. It took me about a week to realize that my wife didn't love me (at least the way I thought she did). It took me about another week for it to sink in that I guess I didn't love her anymore either (hey she treated me like shit. How could you keep loving someone like that?) After that it was easy: drop the bitch with no remorse (except for the kids, of course). The good result? I married someone else who treated me right and she became a drunk. Life can work out okay sometimes.
Gentlemen, your self worth should be internalized, not dependent on how a particular person outside yourself acts. Murder is the act of a weak person, not a strong one.
Be a man. Throw the bitch out if you have to, but get on with your life.
What the hell is the matter with you people???
It is a little over the top, but.....
I'll bet that this scenario happens a lot more, in real life, than the "cuckold who licks her lovers cum out her after discovering her cheating on him" bullshit that often passes for an erotic story on this site.
After wading through the sludge that passes for a loving wife story, it's kind of refreshing to see a story of someone going over the top in the other direction. That doesn't mean it is right, it means its a story that is closer to real life than fantasy.
A bit too much
I thought about this story over night, and think that if he wanted to hurt Marty, it would have been better if he cold cocked Marty in the shower, and then kicked Marty MANY times in the groin - perferably with steel toed boots! Marty caused him pain and grief by the use of his genitals, so Marty should experience pain ( if not the complete ruin) of his genitals. Do you think a jury will convict the husband when he shows the pictures, and says he was in an absolute rage over the cheating? He'll probably get off for that, while murder will be difficult to defend. I can see him leaving his cheating wife, and divorcing her. He might then want to give her a gun with 1 bullet ( after he moves so she doesn't know where he is ) and send a note with it telling her their is only one solution to her grief - suicide. The best revenge is to live well, and hopefully the cheater has a crappy life.
That is the way to go
He was a marine and had been married for only 4 years, he had to love he after being around men so much. She didn't even wait for the seven year itch to take over. Hell they were supposed to be still a young couple. I don't think he went too far unless he kills her. Because if he don't, then he goes to jail for murder, then what can he do from jail while she is out free. He must take her out, because once she finds out that Marty has been killed, she will suspect her husband, then she will become cause him problems. Author please continue.....
That is the way to go
He was a marine and had been married for only 4 years, he had to love he after being around men so much. She didn't even wait for the seven year itch to take over. Hell they were supposed to be still a young couple. I don't think he went too far unless he kills her. Because if he don't, then he goes to jail for murder, then what can he do from jail while she is out free. He must take her out, because once she finds out that Marty has been killed, she will suspect her husband, then she will become cause him problems. Author please continue.....
The law?
Such violence is rightly illegal. Even having been a marine, really an honourable service, doesn't justify his action. The follow up about his time in prison is going to be pretty dull!
Wifes story
All we see is the husband shooting marty and him questioning his wife but no explanations from the wife so when do we hear her side of what happened was she having an affair or were they setting up a surprise birthday for the her husband and marty helping her set it up at the country club.
Pat
Atlanta,Ga.
It's real
Yep, you got a gun, you lose control, you pull a trigger... and all wimps in this universe is going to shake their heads and say no no... But it happens, I'm not saying this is the solution. But let us guess, he's sitting alone ten years ending with a suicide after being your wimpy brother. Or he doing jail ten years for killing the fuc*r that destroyed his marriage ( his wife included of course :).. Coming out with some backbone, not killing himself.. I'd take the later course if it was me... cheers Yoron.
Heh
Pretty funny, some of the comments. Some of the more vocal ones protesting the outcome are probably from those who'd prefer to see hubby eating the lovers' cum out of his "loving wifes'" snatch. Heaven forbid there should be any consequences for doing what she and lover boy did! Personally, I wouldn't have killed the guy...I suspect I'd have kneecapped him and probably cut his nuts off, which I'm sure the cucksters would tell me is too much, but guess what, sometimes the consequences don't fit the actions, and when someone is wronged, they tend to act rather than sit and think about it. Ditto for real men who won't settle for being a nutless wonder to a worthless whore. Maybe the moral of this story should be "don't fuck his wife if you want to keep your life."
SHOULD SHOOT THE SLUT TOO
i don't get it
getting revenge is one thing, but killing someone over a cheating bitch is another. He didn't rape this slut, she fucked Marty of her own free will. So why kill him, her maybe but him and not yourself. Why end your life over a slut.
I rated it 1*.
Just stupid to kill a man over a fuck. Most Marines fuck. Did he kill them too and if not, why not? The author doesn't explain.
There are 30,000,000 men in the USA alone that will fuck a married women. He killed one so just 29,999,999 more to go.
Wow, they have a real communication's problem!
If you keep a gun at hand opportunitys to use it will offer themselves up! Perhaps he can offer temporary insanity as a successful defence since there was no cooling off period...
It is sort like the business of looking at the DVD of your wife and lover that the PI has made.. If you ever want to be happy, don't!
A Little Extreme
You think? You don't kill the lover. You kill the lover and the cheating whore as they are fucking. No, maybe not. Wait. There's a chapter 2! Oh boy. Let's see what happens...
Wow!
That was a whole bunch over-the-top. I understand his feeling of betrayal and I'm all for blowing up the lovers, but when you do it in this manner, you basically sign your own death warrant. Why would you want to punish yourself that badly for something that you didn't do? Divorce her, try to screw her in the divorce, tell the other man's wife, file lawsuits or just take everything you can get your hands on and leave. But to either face the death penalty or life in prison seems excessive, even for a fantasy story. Maybe in chapter 2 this was his "dream" revenge and he gets smarter.
What
I enjoy the BTB stories. However, I don't like it when the innocent husband dies or is put in jail. A man has to be smarter than that. I would make the cheaters suffer as much as possible, and figure out a way to come out in the clear. I don't mind that the guy was killed, he deserved it, BUT the husband has to be a lot smarter.
Wow what a start??
What is left for the finish - a trial and sentencing then life in prison?
Does she finally get the courage to speak and say magic words to fix it all?
This should be interesting -
What?
Didn't Marty have a job? Obviously his wife did. Did a neighbor never tell Marty's wife about the same strange car in front of their house on Thursday afternoons? I can't imagine where chapter 2 goes.
good story
I f he goes to prison over this, so be it, at least it will be with a clear conscience. should have used a shotgun, and only shot his crotch apart, he'd have bled to death before help got there.
Enjoying it
very good and engaging. Five stars.
loved it
but how can you love a sad story? it's a sorry state of affairs. he'll probably go to jail, but, he wouldn't be any good to anyone else, or himself for a long time.
Thank You
I am so tired of pussy victims. The Glock was the perfect touch. I am going to read pt2 now but this story was great. Sometimes you have to do what you have to do .
That's How Wife Stealers Should Be Handled
I like stories where husbands are willing to kill the man who is destroying his marriage. It happens far more in real life than in fiction. In fiction most of the husbands are scared of the consequences, the courts, and the law. Not so much in real life.
No Proof?
"but she wouldn't talk to me and I had no proof of anything so I decided to see what would happen" - She flat-out LIED to you when she called, there are multiple calls from Marty, whose wife she doesn't get along with, who conveniently left your golf group, and who she was maybe a little too close to at the last Country Club dance,
What do you need, to see them in bed together?
And why, oh why didn't he confront her when she lied?
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