All Comments on 'Al·Gharb·3'

by Lauren Hynde

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
wonderful series

The photos are breathtaking and they're paired with wonderful poetry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
!

Lauren, this is perfectly wonderful! I have never wanted to meet anyone from the net ('cept Ange!) til now. If you're ever in the D.C. area let me know, and we'll find a mossy bank on the Shenandoah and have a chat while the water cools the wine! I believe there is enough of a generation gap that we'd find a lot in common, and a lot uncommon.

Beautiful work! Thank you.

Boo

impressiveimpressivealmost 19 years ago
Yes!

The words are SO in sync with the photo. There is a "rightness" to the entire piece -- the whole greater than the sum of its parts. Very well done! ~Imp

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
rugged ridge read

and smooth to the eyes visuals are excellent, astounding and simply marvelous. A Zen Master material of Earths elements set in forever (from our stand point) inspirational.

AngelineAngelinealmost 19 years ago
I agree!

with the other commenters. This is a beautiful marriage of words and image. Your words kept drawing me back to the photo, read and look, over and over. You're a smart cookie Lauren, but mostly you've got a poet's heart that shines through every time. xo, A.

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Has the ability...

to take us on scenic travels without even having to leave home. Both the words and image can actually make us visualize and almost feel every detail.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
This series......

......has made me want to visit this amazing place. I love your choice of illustration. I wish I could give you 10.

Tess

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEalmost 19 years ago
No#3

Is my favorite so far.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
The

illustarion and your

wonderful poetry are

a match made in heaven.

A Breathtaking piece.

~ J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Ho Hum

Good picture.Bland words.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
beautiful

as always! great job Lauren...

Kisses,

T

LinderellaLinderellaover 18 years ago
Now this...

is talent. What a treasure!

TrollyTrollyover 18 years ago
From Under the Bridge

I really don't see what is great about this. Similar to anonymous comment, bland words. The picture is nice - perhaps even better it there is personal relevance - but then I see lots and lots of really great pictures. I almost suspect rather than just black and white, there is a degree on brown on some proboscises. . . .

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love it

I like the organic command at the finish, and "by the passion of the tides by the tenderness/of maritime weapons" is a wonderful image!

Fly

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Here it has the feel of the eternal

Unceasing actions continuing almost with conscious purpose;

Looking at these photos on my flat screen display I find that by looking at them at differing angles I can see different elements not normally visible in a print or without adjusting intensity levels on the display; they almost have a life of their own.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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