All Comments on 'Cyber Love'

I liked your linked haiku very much. There's a clearly defined beginning, middle, and end, and the middle one is possibly the best thing I will read today. It could absolutely stand on its own.

As long as it is "play" i'm not sure the heart is fooled. Especially if when we hit close we go back to tending the respective gardens of our lives. I suppose it depends on what we sow here, and what it is we'd like to harvest.

Thank you for writing this one.

Haiku.... CUTTING words. You are a model of efficiency, my very opposite. Haiku suits your poetic talents.

But between those 17 cutting words... for those "in the know" lay countless others hidden between those empty spaces.

Yes, it's fantasy

Yes, MY heart made YOU real

That is where I live

You drive me CRAZY

Your words.... intoxicating

Your silence torture

Yes, it is a GAME

But YOU turned me ON too high

YOU find MY off switch

Your spell upon me lies within your words. They are my drug. LOVE YOU

Thanks for commenting.

I wrote it with one person in mind.